What do you think of this book I'm going to write?? (10 points)?

This is a very good plot. If written well, it could be a book that couldn't be put down! But like the person that answered first said, if someone was happily married and had the perfect life, the police officer wouldn't be such a big temptation for her. So maybe you should add another detail to the story, like Rick and Shannon starts arguing because she feels smothered or overprotected by him since she didn't take the psychotic kid seriously and he was really worried. Perhaps he could begin to go to desperate measures to ensure her safety, and she thought it was all ridiculous and they were falling apart because of it? So the police officer could be who she wants to be with since she has problems with Rick. Just an idea. Good job and good luck!